Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Wednesday, 18 September 2019
The Superhero & Villains Final Fight ( Animation ): 2019
Hi Guys today, I did a task its a short movie of my Superhero & Villains fight but the writing so I done short parts of the short and put them in this and made a animation about parts. Hope you Enjoy! :)
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Superhero and The Villain Final Battle:2019
Powers - Superhero
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Powers - Villain
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Teleportation - Can teleport somewhere near where the Villain’s side is.
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Animals Powers - Web
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Ice & Lava - Freezes the Villain’s Side & than the Ice will turn into Lava & than Annihilate them.
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Teleportation
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Strength
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Electrocute - Holds there hand and electrocute them.
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Costume - Superhero
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Costume - Villain
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Dr Builder Plotty man.
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Joker.
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Name - Superhero
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Name - Villain
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Macky Mack.
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Dr Phill
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Problem Planning
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Set up
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Confrontation *
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Rising Action
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Crisis *
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Resolution
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The Villain gets his powers by getting struck by lightning in a different planet - Clown Switcher
The Superhero gets his power by his Father and Mother giving him something that his Mother and Father created.
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Baddie starts to get mad because the students behind him was pushing his chair and pushing him so he done something bad and ate them and started to teleport on the roof and punch the roof and swallow it down.
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The Goodie comes but the Baddie starts to shoot webs onto the Goodie and makes it stay there until the Goodie breaks out of it with his Strength.
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The Ultimate battle between the Goodie and the Baddie. The Good Punches the Baddie in the mouth and Freezes him and tries to make the Lava come towards him but little did the Goodie know that the Baddies was cloned as the Villain.
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The Goodie fixes the school roof and so the students had a nice day with the Villain in jail but The Villain uses his teleportain until the cops come so he uses the Electrocute power.
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Macky Mack and Dr Phill were very close friends in school. It was their last day of school before they said bye to each other. They were still going to be close friends after that day. Both friends were walking home but it was a rainy afternoon. Thunder and Lightning had created a combination. Each friend was walking different ways until the Thunder And Lightning had struck onto the friends, and on that day, they were suddenly teleported to their beds and went to sleep.
Few Months Later: Season 2 Coming soon in December the 13th.
Dr Phill started to feel the teleportation of the lightning that struck. He started to feel the animal powers charge up. Dr Builder started to feel his right hand getting colder and colder and his left hand starting to get flamed until he put his hands together and combined he said “Am I a real superhero?” Dun dun dun. later they were at school until the students behind the villain started bullying him until they pushed his chair & pushed him. The Villain got really bad and turned around in an Ultimate evil face and ate the bullies than ran outside and jumped onto the roof and punched the roof down & swallowed the roof down.
That day later the Goodie “Dr Builder Plotty man” came and tried to punch the Villain but the Dr Builder’s power fainted and fell, So the Villain shooted webs onto him and made him stuck until the superhero used his Strength and punched out.
The ultimate battle between the Goodie Dr Builder and the Baddie “Joker” they had a battle punched the Joker’s mouth and started to make it bleed and then Freezed the Joker and tries to make the Joker get eliminated but little did Dr Builder know the Joker was cloned as the Villain.
The Goodie went to school and fixed the school roof and made everyone go back to work while the Joker was in Jail until the Joker Used his Teleportation until cops came and so he held there hand and electrocuted them. The villain called the people on his side and said “Hurry up guys get to Villain city” Villain city was known as not much a Villain City but normally where everyone goes. So Dr Builder remembered that he had teleportation where the villains go so he teleported to them and started to freeze all of them and rise his hand in the air and make the Lava rise the ice up there bones and heads, he saw the Villain standing there but the villain was thinking to teleport to “RDC oreo scatter ring city” RDC was a place where nearly everyone in the world goes even the school and the students even the teachers. But Dr Builder teleported to RDC and just saw the Villain disguised as Dr Phill Dr Builder had already knew who Dr Phill was because they were close friends. They were talking to each other and had another fight again and so Dr Builder froze the Joker and tried to pull his Hand up and forcing his hand to get up it was harder and harder while he was getting closer and closer the Dr Builders tries his hardest until snowflakes come down and then it gets easier because the Joker does not like snow and snowflakes. When Dr Builder opened his eyes they were glistening and crystals were cracking down into the air. Later that day Dr Builder went home and ate ice-cream. Happily ever after.
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Monday, 2 September 2019
Write Like Paul: 2019
WALT: write using the structure of a narrative.
Write like Paul (Jennings)
Hello my name is Teddy Mc Stilton Aka or more like Teddy Mc Flair tin! In the past I have been having over 100’s and 100’s different kinds of DREAMS! Magical and Disappearing Dreams! Not any kind of dreams! More like very cool dreams!
But it's not about telling you about the dreams I've had, it’s about me taking you guys on a journey into my dreams! But first I need to put a potion into my book before I launch myself into a hiding spot in school! Here I go! POOF!
Well my face got dirty but who cares i’m in a dream that I really wanted to be in! So this is my day I’m really in school what? School, School & SCHOOL! I really wanted to be in school but it’s alright with these highschool students that are nearly learning there driving lessons soon more like me in 13 Years! Should I skip years and put myself in the Driver's Lessons! YES! It’s time I drive! Drifty, Drifty & Drifty! WOW that was a ride!
*Bell Rings* BRING BRING BRING! Eh? The bell rang noooo I guess I gotta go cooking class.. Wait wait wait! I can steal food from Cooking Class and take it home and invite my friends over! So I stole food and was thinking “Which food should I take?” Ahh I got an idea “Pizza -_- and Ice-cream and Doughnuts / Donuts!” So I took those food and invited my friends over. So I added the food in my bag more like at shopping scanning the product / Item and putting the product in the shopping bag and taking it home to pack in your house! Well I went to my phone and called my friend called “ Zelina & Selena” “Hello? Zelina and Selena are you there ''Hello? So I saw your text and it said Do you wanna come have a party on my house I stole food from Cooking class ''Sure Bro anyone else gonna be there YEP! “Who?” “Umm Zach, Charlotte, Keith, Zak, Brianna and others!” Alright we will on our way! *calls every friend that I said* Hello come to my house a party over here with Zelina and Selena! Alrighty! Charlotte from the top stairs screams Zach! KEITH! Zak! Brianna! GET ready! We got a party to go to! HURRY! Get in the car! Also the car’s name is Tiffany! were finally here! So we all ate the food and Teddy Mc Flair said come upstairs to watch a movie called “FART MONSTERS” Oh I use to watch this when I was little but ok! We could watch it! So we all watched Farts and Monsters so we saw a Monster called “ Sausage man “ he was helping another guy clean the restroom! Eww! Teddy Mc Flair tin! Started crying and they said what Happened? And Teddy said that they said Eww because that was his friend cleaning the restrooms! And they all said Oh I’m sorry we will go down the shop to buy food for you so you can be happy again!
They all went home until they the car ran out of petrol so Teddy put the petrol in and as soon as the car just turned on Zelina said “Watch out thats dangerous it has Chemical’s and Umonium in it!” Teddy said Alright so Teddy took them all home to make them have the sleep! So Teddy had a sleep and didn’t dream not as normal as all.
The Next Morning Teddy ran to the Kitchen and started eating doughnuts, Pizza & Ice-cream!
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Thursday, 29 August 2019
Guide to the Rocky Shore: 2019
Task Description: Today I did a task called "Guide the life on the Rocky Shore" Aka "Guide to Rocky Shore" So in this task on the last page there is something I did about creatures! :)
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Friday, 16 August 2019
The Rocky Shore: 2019
WALT: paraphrase and summarise information
The Rocky Shore is an inter-tidal habitat. The Rocky shore has an inter-tidal splash zone known as ‘The Rocky Shore’ has multiple zones just like.. ( Littoral zone, sub-littoral ). It is a common place in New Zealand and other places in the world, you might be thinking there is just rocks there are also interesting Creatures. The Rocky Shore also has common creatures like barnacles and others! The Splash zone or Supra-tidal zone directly above the high tide mark and the Sub-tidal is at the low tide mark. The only way to get water on the Splash zone is when storm’s are out and king tide’s come. Also plants and animals ( Creatures ) live in this zone. The intertidal zone is between the high zone and low zone mark. The crab lives near the high tide zone I believe, the mussels ( Barnacles ) live near the low tide zone. Also if the storms are out in the air than that means the High tide zone can cause a King tide. The sub-tidal zone is directly at the bottom of the inter-tidal zone. It also sits beneath the low tide mark! It is approximately covered with water. Also organisms do not therefore dry out and grow much faster. The sub-tidal zone is directly at the bottom of the inter tidal zone. It also sits beneath the low tide mark! It is approximately covered with water. Also organisms do not therefore dry out and grow much faster.
Tuesday, 23 July 2019
Rocky Shore: 2019
WALT:Research and write about about sea creatures from the rocky shore.
Task Description: Today in this task its about my task I did about "Rocky Shore" its about the sea! I picked "fish" out I know fish is one of the most basic sea animals to chose out but I picked it out! In my task I did I have some things I found out I researched stuff and found these kind of stuff! Hope you enjoy!
Monday, 24 June 2019
Independent & dependent 2019
WALT: to construct effective sentences.
Task Description: Today in this task its about 'Independent & dependent clauses' its about the Tonga game & the kiwi's game. At the end its about Mr Goodwin's puppy named Poppy. Hope u enjoy!
Task Description: Today in this task its about 'Independent & dependent clauses' its about the Tonga game & the kiwi's game. At the end its about Mr Goodwin's puppy named Poppy. Hope u enjoy!
Thursday, 20 June 2019
Sailing Recount 2019
Introduce the topic. Tease the audience with some interesting details that they will want to know more about.
Who was going with you. Some of my classmates.
How did you get there. From the Bus we had to arrive at 8:15am and we finish at 3:00Pm.
What did you wear. Point England school uniform after we got there our wetsuits. Where did you get the gear from. Some of us got wetsuits and I got all my stuff. How were you feeling during the instructions I was feeling scared at first, because I thought when I was in the sailing boat I was gonna go to far like way out water but luckily I was in the speedboat first.
Who did you sail with. First I was in the speedboat with Justin because I had no buddy. Was it fun/scary etc. First it was scary because I thought I was gonna go way out the water. Second it was so fun because when I got in the speedboat it was so fun because I had so much fun in the speedboat and it was fun nearly making my classmate Austin and Kitione nearly fall of their sailing boat because of me.
What were your overall thoughts about the sailing? Amazing.
Hello, some of the people in my class room 7, got a opportunity to go sailing! Your guys brain will explode like a billion pieces when u read this recount about sailing!
Also thank Saint Johns for giving room 7 this opportunity to come sailing with you and thank to the sponsors who helped us.
First, we had to arrive at school at 8:15am. When our school teacher called us to come inside. We obviously already knew who was coming with us. It was most of my classmates and a teacher Mrs Tuiā. Our teacher Mrs Tuiā that came with us said if u haven't got your togs on go to the toilets and put them on. Next we went to line up and go sit in the bus. When the bus started to go to the location we were of to everyone start to sing and play.. Everyone just started to enjoy staying on the bus playing and having fun!
First, they asked us to take of our school uniforms but we had our togs underneath and than they asked us to line up in two lines on the ground. Next they told us everything about sailing and than they asked all of us to stand up in two lines ready to put our life jackets on. When everyone was finish they all got with there buddy’s well not me because I had no buddy so I went in the speedboat with Justin.
When I was in the deep water I wanted help from Mrs Tuiā and than she said if u want help than jump into the water.. So I just jumped of and I tried to get on Kauri and Kahurangi’s Sailing boat but they keep pushing me of so I just went to Mrs Tuiā boat and stayed their and te wind was blowing my hair. I tried making the ball wet so I put the ball and holded it but the speedboat was going to fast so I dropped the ball but we picked it up after next I tried putting the green bucket down and it was so hard to hold so I couldn't carry it so I got Lealofi’s help to help me get it back up..
When we finished sailing we went back to school in the bus again. When we were inside the bus it was really fun and when I was sitting with Rae jae, we saw the sea and it looks pretty cool. Me and rae jae found lots of cool stuff on the other side of the ocean me and Rae Jae saw this like thing that looked like a circus and it looked pretty abandoned..!
Fake recount 2019
Fake Recount
Chosen event: Hot dog eating competition
Plan
Intro
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Middle
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Conclusion
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Introduce the story. Me and my friend had a hog dog eating competition read on if u wanna know more!
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When we start the hot dog competition our parents get ready for the competition.
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Suddenly we started eating until we fill full and not wanna eat more..
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We needed to go to the hospital because we were sick.. But after that we went to the beach and our dad came. Than I went school and done the news for tomorrow
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At the end we had only ate one a day and we will never eat over 100 hot dogs again..!
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Start Writing He: Here is how the start off my story started and made me become sick.. So my parents asked me and my friend want to enter a hot dog eating COMPETITION! Ooooo yes please ok Im gonna get the hot dog competition ready! Ok! Finish Finish! Come inside boys. So we came inside and sat down and we got ready for the competition. Suddenly we started eating our hot dog! Num num num! This is yum! Ughh Im getting sick.. I'm getting sick Im gonna go sleep bye! Three weeks later! Ugh im sick Im feeling sick I need to go hospital to check if I’m ok! Hello My name is Dr TrickSter and im gonna check if ur ok because I see u have been waiting for long sitting here.. Ok let’s get start and check you shall we? Let’s start follow me and we will check u! Oh I see ur not very good but what I good do is take u to the X-ray and than u can go sit in the recovery room and wait. Ok in the x-ray says I see lots of stuff in ur stomach it says so many sausages and bread..? Umm Its Hot dogs I had a challenge with my friend and I dont know who won because I went sleep because I had a sore tummy. How Long was this? Umm three weeks ago. Ok so u can go sit in the recovery room and wait for a Dr named Dr CrunchyBubble she will be asking u questions and asking u different kinds of stuff that u gotta answer how u got sick ok.. OK… Hey are u the boy that was with Dr TrickSter? Yes I am. Ok follow me and ill take u to another quiet room and ask u questions and answers how u got into sick and stuff! Ok lets go. So How did u become sick? I became sick when I was eating over 100 hot dogs with my friend because we had a hot dog eating competition and I wanted to do it but I got really sick. Thats not ok if u ever do this again u should probably eat atleast two a day so u dont feel really sick. Hmmmm Bye I guess im gonna go now. My Friends are waiting at my house! WOOOOO Hey Rae Jae, Kauri, Leolofi Hey man u feeling sick now? Nah im not anymore I went to the hospital they said I only have to eat two hot dogs a day or else Ill be sick again. Oh thats what the Dr said to me before. Wait was it Dr Trickster and Dr CrunchyBubble? Yes oh I was with them. Rae Jae, kauri, and Leolofi? Yeah, Yeah, Yeah wanna go gets some lunch at go to the beach? Yeah man Ok I got the food I got pizza, chips, Drinks, Chocolates, and Fish n chips! Sounds great. Lets go get ready! Ok. Oh I see a sad man said Kauri wanna go hang out with him and give him food? Sure. Later on my dad came to the beach when he saw us with chocolates but got more chocolates for us! I said “Hey dad!” he said Heyyy want some chocolates? “Uh we got some!” Oh! Good and than I said “But thanks dad” Overall now I'm gonna go school and go do the news for the whole school to see when they are on the mat! Thanks for reading along!
Tuesday, 11 June 2019
Fake Recount 2019
WALT: write a detailed account.
Fake Recount
Chosen event: Hot dog eating competition
Plan
Intro
Middle
Conclusion
Introduce the story. Me and my friend had a hog dog eating competition read on if you wanna know more!
When we start the hot dog competition our parents get ready for the competition.
We starting eating until we stop and feel bad and you want to sleep.
We needed to go to the hospital because we were sick for two weeks.
At the end we had only ate one a day and we will never eat over 100 hot dogs again..!
Start Writing Here: here is the start off my story how I became sick and yucy in my tummy.. So my parents ask me and my friend want to enter a hot dog eating COMPETITION! Ooooo Yes Please ok Im gonna get the hot dog competition ready! Why dont u guys go play outside of something. Ok! Finish Finish! Come inside boys. So we came inside and sat down and we got ready for the competition. Suddenly we started eating our hot dog! Num num num! This is yum! Ughh Im getting sick.. Im getting sick Im gonna go sleep bye! Three weeks later! Ugh im sick Im feeling sick I need to go hospital to check if Im ok! Hello My name is Dr TrickSter and im gonna check if ur ok because I see u have been waiting for long sitting here.. Ok lets get start and check you shall we? Lets start follow me and we will check u! Oh I see ur not very good but what I good do is take u to the X-ray and than u can go sit in the recovery room and wait. Ok in the x-ray says I see lots of stuff in ur stomach it says so many sausages and bread..? Umm Its Hot dogs I had a challenge with my friend and I dont know who won because I went sleep because I had a sore tummy. How Long was this? Umm three weeks ago. Ok so u can go sit in the recovery room and wait for a Dr named Dr CrunchyBubble she will be asking u questions and asking u different kinds of stuff that u gotta answer how u got sick ok.. OK… Hey are u the boy that was with Dr TrickSter? Yes I am. Ok follow me and ill take u to another quiet room and ask u questions and answers how u got into sick and stuff! Ok lets go. So How did u become sick? I became sick when I was eating over 100 hot dogs with my friend because we had a hot dog eating competition and I wanted to do it but I got really sick. Thats not ok if u ever do this again u should probably eat atleast two a day so u dont feel really sick. Hmmmm Bye I guess im gonna go now. My Friends are waiting at my house! WOOOOO Hey Rae Jae, Kauri, Leolofi Hey man u feeling sick now? Nah im not anymore I went to the hospital they said I only have to eat two hot dogs a day or else Ill be sick again. Oh thats what the Dr said to me before. Wait was it Dr Trickster and Dr CrunchyBubble? Yes oh I was with them. Rae Jae, kauri, and Leolofi? Yeah, Yeah, Yeah wanna go gets some lunch at go to the beach? Yeah man Ok I got the food I got pizza, chips, Drinks, Chocolates, and Fish n chips! Sounds great. Lets go get ready! Ok. Oh I see a sad man said Kauri wanna go hang out with him and give him food? Sure. So we had a happy day and I hope everyone who is reading this Hope u enjoyed!
Task Description: Today in this task its a fake recount so I we had 4 things we could do.. Big Trouble, Fall asleep at the airport, Hot dog competition and The Rescue. I picked Hot dog Competition and this is what happen in the hot dog competition! Hope u enjoy!
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Wednesday, 15 May 2019
Starting with Strings - Match The Word
WALT: understand new vocabulary

Task Description: Today in this task its about Match word to meaning so in this task their are words on the left side that u have to try to match on the right side. Hope you enjoy!
Task Description: Today in this task its about Match word to meaning so in this task their are words on the left side that u have to try to match on the right side. Hope you enjoy!
Monday, 6 May 2019
Setting Description 2 2019
WALT: paint an image in the readers mind.
Three things you can see in this picture
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One thing you imagine
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1. Tree Trunks
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2. Leaves
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3. Grass
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4. Imagine
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Language:
Tall, towering, thick, crust, bold, breathtaking, enchanting, flagrant, fresh, nature, gorgeous, blooming, native, pruned, ready-to-bloom, vibrant, stunning, shade, crisp, crunchy, fall, autumn, spring, summer, cut, growth, decay, rotten
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Tree Trunks: The tree trunks has a colour of a light green colour and a dark green colour its blended in together its made a bamboo colour. The tree has long tree branches sticking out everywhere at the top off the tree its light green and dark green.
Leaves: The leaves got a beautiful colour that is a kind of dark green. The two green colours i've came up with that has blended in was Fern and chartreuse they are type of nice nice dark greens.
Grass: The grass is a very light green colour. The Light green grass looks like its blended in with a lime colour. The grass has a beautiful colour that is like a light green a dark green and a lighter lighter green mixed all together the colour I've came up with that I thought the colour looked like was Lime.
Imagine: I will imagine to see “Japan” people walking around to look for cute chubby small panda’s that are eating bamboo’s.
Task Description: Today's task was another Setting Description 2. This is another one about in a forest or something. But these are some stuff I think things in this picture look like.
Thursday, 2 May 2019
Setting Description 2019
WALT: paint a image in readers
Ocean: The Ocean is light ombre blue its glistening into my eyes. It has a mixture of ombre blue and a nice light turquoise color blended in.
Sand: The sand has a mixture of wet sand and dry sand. The Wet sand and the dry sand is mixed together and its makes a beautiful dark yellow color.
Sky: In this picture I see the sky. The sky has a mixture of white and some dark white its has blended into a lighter white cloud. The sky is blue but also mixed in with a lighter color like turquoise.
Bucket: In this picture I imagined to add a bucket in. The bucket iv’e added in is a creative bucket. The color of the bucket is gonna be dark red and light red, the dark red and light red is mixed together and its made a red color that has blended.
Task description: In this task its about my setting description: so this is about the ocean, sky, sand , bucket, this is what the things I thought looked like. Some of my things ive said that two colour's are blended together and mixed.
Monday, 8 April 2019
Punctuation Challenge - Poppy the Puppy!
WALT: use correct punctuation.
Task Description: Today we did a ' Punctuation Challenge ' so this is my work its all about my Punctuation challenge so this challenge was all about my teachers dog called Poppy she is very cute..
Friday, 22 February 2019
The Mission Recount 2019
WALT: Structure a recount correctly
The Mission
Introduction
First we: Marching
Than we: Sneaking
After that: Fitness
Conclusion
Start Writing Here:
Hello, My name is Bradley, Today our insane teacher took us to a secret mission. Has your teacher been insane and weird?
First we went outside and went into two straight lines, than we turned into soldiers and we got 3 task’s to do. First we went marching outside of the classrooms. As soon as we got to the pavillion our second task was to do…
‘Marching’
Than we: Our second task our insane teacher got us to ‘Sneak’ Across the pavilion than we got over excited than we said “Yes Sir!” So we ‘Sneaked’ across the pavilion like we were real soldiers. Next our teacher got us to do that was…’
‘Sneaking’
Our last exercise was!: ‘Fitness’
Our last exercise was Fitness so when we finished doing ‘Sneaking’ we marched to the field and done fitness so our fitness was to do Sit ups, Pushups, Balancing, so our first fitness exercise was a Exercise i do not like that was ‘Pushups’ so we done 5 pushups than he told us to Stand up with our hands on our side so we said “Yes Sir!” So next he told us to the exercise ‘Sit ups’ so we done 10 sit ups and than stand up and put our hands on our side like we were soldiers than our lucky lucky LUCKY LAST exercise was ‘Balancing’ so in our Balancing we had to balance like we were on a plane that was start to lift of so when we balanced he pushed a boy named ‘Kitione’ and made him fall down next he pushed a boy named ‘Austin’ but Austin still balanced and never fell what a Master.
Conclusion:
What a insane mission I want to do this in a real movie like in a movie named “Time to Save the World” Than we marched back to our classroom and wrote about it. By The Way we were pretending that we were soldiers.
Task description: Today we did a Army mission so our teacher gave us 3 tasks to do they were 'Sneaking, Fitness, & Marching.
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