choose it narrative

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.

Bradley choose it narrative

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.

Long time ago once upon a time there there was a little boy called jack when he got older he really wanted to take people to my plane home,it had a forest and trees in front of the plane’s nose and it mixed up.

On the side of it had walking steers and it look like a house because of the green grass and it looks like one because the steers when you walk up there might be a door there or a secret button that you have to click. When the little boy saw at the back of him he saw 2 planes just like the first plane he saw.

The little boy saw a water car in front of the plane and he saw blue shining water. Next when I flew I did not know that there was a person climbing on the steps so he fell of and Threw a bomb into, my plane my plane exploded like fireworks. I had no parachute so my boss flew in his plane and got me and then I was safe. Next after that there was a doll climbing up on his heavy metal mysterious rope that can never cut down so  my boss flew back to the palace and the evil disgusting doll’s name was annabelle  but it did not move when I walked in, it was halloween And there was 5 skeletons and 25 pumpkins fat face that can move like real humans and they were trying to eat me and trap me into their pumpkin fathead jail.

The end.

today morning we did a writing called choose a narrative it is fun and you have to pick a picture of your favourite one then you write about and do the planning and the main characters and the new characters.

my what if planet

My what if planet!

Insert a picture of the planet you created on paper.

Write a paragraph describing your planet. Use adjectives to make your description more detailed. Don’t forget full stops and capital letters.

Start Writing here: My planet's name is bob I can see my own planet and my own spacecraft that has landed on my planet.

I can see my own colours my favourite 3 colours are white red and dark pink. On my tree’s it has silver stars glowing all around.

In the middle of nowhere I go inside the icy castle there is spider crawling around on their webs and my icy castle is made out of shiny sparkly diamonds and crystals.

On my planets their is red and orange fire floating all around and there is blue and red mixed together and it makes purple lightning and electric and the green is slimy.

design your own rocket

My Amazing rocket Ship look like a Butterfly with a chicken head it special power you push the special button and it will give you McDonald it Thrusher come out with out with flames and money.

I used my Hover board to drive to the elevator. I get off my Hover then I pressed a button to get in. When I get out I jump on the trampoline 2x higher. Than I get in my rocket Ship on stairs then I sit on my chair than my rocket Ship say’s 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 then my Thrusters have fire at the bottom of it than my rocket goes slowly up into the air and does flips. When i'm out of space I see a dog floating outside my rocket and I see aliens and earth and mars.

As I was heading into space I go to mars I see rocks floating and see androids when I look up there is two moon Phobos and Deimos. It is like in space when I brush my teeth my toothbrush floats past when I let go. I see outside my rocket comets shooting past.  

Trip To Star Dome

Phase of the moon

Start your writing here: The amount of the moon that you can see from earth depends how much of it is liter by the sun. This amount changes each day the phases of the moon depends on it position in the relation to the sun and earth. Is the moon  makes it way around the earth we see the bright parts.

the frog

the green slimy frog gripped out of her tree and saw a  little red and  black cricket floating onto the slimy leaf down it water. Intime the cricket was close down the water intime the slimy frog caught the cricket with it outstretched tongue. But she did not noo that the crickets has be’nt in the rubbish bin. Next the frog did not noo where the other cricket so she looked around it was down it the river behind the tree. She caught it with her long tongue.

Ned Show

A yo yo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with. A yo yo was made and played with 1,500 years ago they were Ancient toys in Greece. I enjoy playing with my yo yo, I like doing tricks and playing with my friends also it goes up and down

pick a path

        Haunted House Pick a Path

Use descriptive words.

We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.  

You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out…

I found a key I tried to unlock the door but it was not the right key so I called someone but they did not answer so I called my social worker I told her get your key and come to the haunted house with lots of trees covering the haunted house. “She said why than I said this hurry up but she did not come. “I went to the back door there was a speaker it said you're not getting out of here I was thinking In my brain hm I think I will go up the chimney so I did but the chimney was blocked I saw stairs and I went up there but when I standed on any stairs the

stars started to crumble down. When I was at the top of the stairs I had no way to get down. I see a window I had a way out I saw a hammer and a axe I tried the hammer it smashed a big hole in the window but someone was upstairs I pecked my eyes to look if she was coming she was coming so I saw draws and saw a kitchen and I saw 5 cupboards I got my hammer and I smashed the cupboards down then I took one by one than I closed the door than I got the 5 cupboards and the draws and I blocked the door with the cupboards and draws but the ghosts came threw the door so I had no way out. But I got my hammer and I smack the hammer into it body but the ghosts went threw it. I ran up stairs then I saw something was up to me it was wooden buckets and draws  so I smacked the them down than it bumped on the ghosts but the ghosts came back alive. I saw big web shooters on the side of the  ghosts so I got 1 web shooter than I shot the web on the ghosts. To be continued

Chocolate cake

Today Room 15 were eating chocolate cake and banana and even vanilla ice cream. Room fifteen enjoyed eating vanilla ice and chocolate cake and even bananas all together. When the cruchy bars were making a chocolate cake