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Showing posts with label Writing2016. Show all posts

Monday, 12 December 2016

Book view

This morning we were reading with other teacher from the office and from the  Pavilion.   I really enjoyed the books that they read to us in the hall. My favourite book was Mr Blakey's book because the king took the lady and spun her to get more and more gold. My other favourite book was Miss Davis's book because it was a book that had no pictures which was really different. Thank you to all the teachers in this school



Tuesday, 6 December 2016

My year

My favourite thing with our teacher was playing games with Shannon and doing science experiment with Mr Vogt. I really like working with our release when miss belt not here and she has a meetings. We made mousse and vanilla ice cream with peaches inside. When I first started coming into my new classroom our teacher was miss belt and I knew that it was my teacher because when mr Bert said I had to go to miss belt and line up.



Wednesday, 30 November 2016

Scratch movie

Tomorrow morning Room 15 are doing scratch I hope Room 15 will enjoy it. My two  animals are a lion and a tiger. They are funny and powerful. The mane around the lion's head is fluffy and the tiger is got straps on everywhere on him and it got a long tail and the lion got a long tail to. The lion and tiger is angry and dangerous.


Wednesday, 23 November 2016

Making mousse

WALT:  We are learning about the changes in matter.  

What ingredients did we need to make mousse? 
Milk and mousse plastic spoons and cups.

What happened when we added the ingredients?
 When we put the powder in it then it sat on top of the milk.We had to stir it really fast with the electric mixer to dissolve it. When we were stirring the milk and powder we saw bubbles on top. The bubbles were air bubbles from stirring it fast.

It went to solid powder then it went to liquid then it was solid when we dissolved.

What did we learn? Room 15 were learnt about mousse.some the people in Room 15 were making strawberry mousse and some people were making chocolate mousse. We can not change it back to a powder solid.


Friday, 18 November 2016

Chromebooks

Yesterday Room 15 went to Room 11 and 12 classroom to work with them. We went to their classroom so the Year threes know how to use their chromebook. I can't wait to get my chromebook next year when I'm a Year Four. After we finished with our work we could go on Cool Maths Games or Maths Whizz or other games online. Room 15 enjoyed it with Room 11 and 12 on their chromebooks. Mr Moran gave us each a buddy from Room 11 and 12.


Monday, 14 November 2016

Athletics

On Friday on a cloudy sunny day the whole school from Pt England went to athletics. My favourite station was the high jump because you get to jump over the high jump stick. The whole school of Pt England were doing different kinds of stuff. MrsMoala let us have a break then Mrs moala brought us back on the field then we played some more athletics. After we played some more athletics the bell was going to ring soon but mrs moala took us over to Mr Blakeys side where his children eat at morning tea and lunch. We went over there because she didn't want the people to look at us eating chocolate and lollies.


Thursday, 10 November 2016

Manaiakalani Film Festival

Yesterday on the ninth of November Room 15 was excited that we were going to the Manaiakalani film festival show to go watch some movies. Room 15 went to the Manaiakalani film festival show. When room 15 movie came on everyone was clapping and cheering for our movie. Inside the Manaiakalani film festival show there were bright lights and lots of people from pt England school. Room 15s movie came on the big screen and I thought that was fabulous and very very amazing. My favourite,favourite movie was our one because we were dressed up as actors. In our story Joseph was Luke skywalker that was fighting Deejay as Darth Vader.






Monday, 7 November 2016

The science

Once upon a time there was a little robot and his name was Mike. His eyes were piercing blue eyes that were scary. Once he destroying the city he did it know that the earth destroying because of him so they had to found a new good planet to stay and wait for them to fix their old planet then they lived long time. Mike destroyed the planet because he was evil and he had this red circle thing on  his eye so the police man and police lady shot him so he can not destroy the city again and when he went down they took the red thing of his eye so he does it destroy the planet down again. Then he become good.

Once upon a time there was a little robot and his name was Mike. His eyes were piercing blue that were scary. Once he destroyed the city he didn't know that the earth was breaking down so they had to find a new good planet to stay and wait for them to fix their old planet that they lived on a long time. Mike destroyed the planet because he was evil and he had this red circle laser on  his eye so the policeman and police lady shot him so he can not destroy the city again. When he went down they took the red laser out of his eye so he does it destroy the planet again and that turned him into being good.



Friday, 4 November 2016

Halloween haunted house

My costume for Halloween is a skeleton. Im going to ask my mum for lollies and chocolate in a big Halloween bucket. In the nighttime I'm going to go somewhere to eat. I might go to mc Donald's to go eat there before I go trick a treating. After I finish eating at Mc Donald's I will go out to trick a treating. When I go out to trick a treating I'm going with my parents to a house to go and get some lollies and chocolate. Then I will go home and watch some Halloween movies for little kids.if someone knocks on the door I think they are coming for lollies or chocolate then we will give them Lille's or chocolate if they want some we willgive them some. If the lollies or chocolate are finish then my parents will go and get some more lollies so other people can go out and do trick a treating. After other people done trick a treating my mum will take me out for trick a treating so I can go trick a treating and go and eat some lollies and chocolate.


Monday, 31 October 2016

Halloween

My costume for Halloween is a skeleton. Im going to ask my mum for lollies and chocolate in a big Halloween bucket. In the nighttime I'm going to go somewhere to eat. I might go to mc Donald's to go eat there before I go trick a treating. After I finish eating at Mc Donald's I will go out to trick a treating. When I go out to trick a treating I'm going with my parents to a house to go and get some lollies and chocolate. Then I will go home and watch some Halloween movies for little kids.if someone knocks on the door I think they are coming for lollies or chocolate then we will give them Lille's or chocolate if they want some we willgive them some. If the lollies or chocolate are finish then my parents will go and get some more lollies so other people can go out and do trick a treating. After other people done trick a treating my mum will take me out for trick a treating so I can go trick a treating and go and eat some lollies and chocolate.

Friday, 21 October 2016

Experiment

Yesterday Miss belt told us how to make yeast. We had warm water and yeast even sugar. First we put the sugar in the glass cup. then miss belt put the warm water in. 
Then miss belt put yeast inside the cup. she had to stir it. Yesterday miss belt gave us a turn then we had to do the same thing what she done. Miss belt had to leave it overnight. This morning we saw the yeast was drowned up. After the assembly we came back to class to she if the yeast is drowned up but it was not drowned up it was wet. Then miss belt had to make a new one. 





Wednesday, 19 October 2016

The cave

Once  upon a time there was a spooky cave that was far away.  The spooky cave was scary and creepy. Then a bat family and tigers family moved into a cave.The bat family and the tiger family were team mates. The cave started brokering down. Outside there was an dragon that was flying around and around. The dragon started to blow fire everywhere but the monkeys started to to jump on top of the dragon then the dragon  started to die for ever and then the dragon would never come back. The problem fixed when tigers,bats,and monkeys jumped on top of the dragon and the monkeys and bats and tigers did not care.


Monday, 17 October 2016

Who took the bread

Who took the bread??  Make your story interesting and descriptive.
One morning we woke up then we were feeding our dog we put the bread on the table. Then we went in the lounge to watch tv. we went in the kitchen then there was no bread because the thief took it. 
The thief ran away out the door. Then the people came back then there  saw footprints on the floor then they followed the footprints the footprints was on the kitchen floor too. They looked on the table in the kitchen then there were no bread. We went to the police station to explain them if they can go and find our bread then they went to find them they got them and putted them in jail then we got our bread back.


One morning we woke up and we were feeding our grumpy dog.  We put the bread on the table. Then we went in the lounge to watch tv. We went in the kitchen then there was no bread because the thief took it. 
The thief ran away out the door. Then the people came back and saw footprints on the floor.  They followed the  muddy footprints on the kitchen floor. They looked on the table in the kitchen then there was no bread. We went to the police station to ask them if they can go and find our bread.  They went to find them. They find the people who stole  the bread then they brought the bread back to the delighted. people and then they were happily ever after.

Friday, 14 October 2016

Tasting bread

On Wednesday Room 15 was excited that we were going to eat bread. My favourite bread was the croissant bread. The croissant bread tasted floury. The        croissant bread was a little bit hard. The pita bread was soft and flat. What I like about the pita bread was it was different from the other breads that Room 15 ate. My favourite, favourite bread was the pita bread.

Monday, 10 October 2016

Ch.ch.ch.ch..changes

Ch-ch-ch-changes     science     experiments      explosion      mess      assembly
At the assembly people ate pancakes. I love pancakes. Pancakes  are yummy and if I ate one it will be yummy. I like team threes movie. In team threes movie we were learning about cooking so they showed a movie how to make food. Team 5 had a lovely movie. Mr  Fuzzy  Wuzzy  told his slave to do stuff for him.  He told his slave  to put the water balloon  on top of Mrs Tele’as head.  Then he told her to put the two  drinks on Miss Berry's  face. At the end he told her to the ice inside Miss Clarke's shirt. Mr Fuzzy Wuzzy Vottom tricked her and put a water balloon  on her head.


Thursday, 22 September 2016

Thursday, 15 September 2016

How many gold medals can you get this term

Miss Vaafusuaga opened the sports cupboard and all the equipment was gone.
Miss Vaafusuaga closed the cupboard then they asked at Miss Vaafusuaga can I have your keys to play with the rugby ball and they were strangers caused they were acting like someone at pt England. The people that were strangers there were burgers  that always still into houses.  

Miss Vaafusuaga closed the cupboard softly.  The big boys asked Miss Vaafusuaga “can I have your keys to play with the rugby ball”. They were strangers because  they were acting like someone at Pt England School, but they weren't! The people that were strangers were actually  burglars,  that always sneak  into houses.  They were tippy toeing into the hallway  to steal the rugby ball. Miss Vaafusuaga was disappointed because they stole the little  rugby ball.
 




Tuesday, 13 September 2016

The gold medal got stolen

gold     medal       missing     silver      bronze       Olympics        
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The gold medal  was stolen by the burglars.  They snatched the gold medal and the gold medal was broken in half.  The burglars threw the broken gold medal in the rubbish.  Then the burglars came back. When the old man and old lady went inside the house the burglars came in the house and they pushed the old man and the old lady out. They stole the gold medal then another guy in the shower shot the 10 burglars and the robbers down.  The burglars and robbers came back but the police car came to put them in jail.


Friday, 9 September 2016

Learn about eels

Yesterday room 15 went to the assembly to learn about eels to keep them safe from not eating plastics in the water and even car battery's newspapers and bike parts. Eels are black and slimy and slippery and yucky. Eels have sharp teeth and they crawl like a snake. Remember that don't put shopping trolley in the water too countdown, pak.n save, toy, world. When they you open their the eels mouth its is blue. Eels have to be safe in the water so eels can stay alive if there's no plastics bags car battery's newspapers bike parts in the water.


Tuesday, 30 August 2016

A day in the life of a sports star

INTRODUCTION:
Who are the characters in my story?
Where is my story set - which country, city  -  where in that city?
When is my story set?
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Start your introduction here there were Valerie Adams mahe Drysdale Lydia Ko bond and Murray us ain bolt and Lisa Carrington. At their  game they can play games or the day can be raining or there coach could be in a trafficking and he was coming late. Or the coach can be at a apartment they will have a another coach if it wasn't raining or had thunder or lighting the the game could  of been cantal. 

Lydia Ko was at a castle she asked a room service for feedback and she got a drink from the room service and the place she was  at she was at  Pakistan and her food was chocolate and her drink was juice. 







PROBLEM:
What problem do your characters face?
How did the problem happen?
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Start writing about your problem here
On the game someone could trip you over or yourself could if  fallen over. 
Or your bone could  of Breakdown and then you could go to the hospital. 
If it was a sunny day your team could off when on in a boat and you came late then they couldof forgot you or if you came on time and you went a boat and there were to much people or the boat could of break down. 


Lydia ko got  in trouble because she went out off the castle then they had to go on to their  horse to hide away from the people that are getting her. but Lydia Ko went on a black horse to run fastest then the white horse so she can run faster and hide away the people that are getting her. So Lydia Ko came to the castle she had to took the King and the  Princess and the president and to give her a speak.








RESOLUTION:
How did the problem get solved?
What did the characters do?  
How does your story end?
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Start writing about your resolution here they should do a apology and walk away if they were in a fight if someone was from India you should this go back to there own country. Latter ago Lydia Ko came out the kingdom to talk to the King and the queen to tell her not to run out the castle again and she did want they told her.
INTRODUCTION:
Who are the characters in my story?
Where is my story set - which country, city  -  where in that city?
When is my story set?
=========================================================

Start your introduction here there were Valerie Adams mahe Drysdale Lydia Ko bond and Murray us ain bolt and Lisa Carrington. At their  game they can play games or the day can be raining or there coach could be in a trafficking and he was coming late. Or the coach can be at a apartment they will have a another coach if it wasn't raining or had thunder or lighting the the game could  of been cantal. 

Lydia Ko was at a castle and she asked a room service for feedback.  She got a drink from the room service for food. The place she was  at she was at  Pakistan her food was chocolate and juice. 







PROBLEM:
What problem do your characters face?
How did the problem happen?
=========================================================

Start writing about your problem here
On the game someone could trip you over or yourself could if  fallen over. 
Or your bone could  of Breakdown and then you could go to the hospital. 
If it was a sunny day your team could off when on in a boat and you came late then they couldof forgot you or if you came on time and you went a boat and there were to much people or the boat could of break down. 


Lydia ko got  in trouble because she went out off the castle then they had to go on to their  horse to hide away from the people that are getting her. but Lydia Ko went on a black horse to run fastest then the white horse so she can run faster and hide away the people that are getting her. So Lydia Ko came to the castle she had to took the King and the  Princess and the president and to give her a speak.








RESOLUTION:
How did the problem get solved?
What did the characters do?  
How does your story end?
=========================================================

Start writing about your resolution here they should do a apology and walk away if they were in a fight if someone was from India you should this go back to there own country. Latter ago Lydia Ko came out the kingdom to talk to the King and the queen to tell her not to run out the castle again and she did want they told her.