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Monday 20 August 2018

Narrative plan


Today I was writing about a plan for my Narrative of a peephole so in my story there was a glistening diamond alien that tried to kill the boy in the dress  and then the boy ran outside then the alien ran outside well then the alien died and melted because of the storm because he couldn't hand all the storm so when he melted where he died the was glistening 

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