Friday, 17 November 2017
Wednesday, 15 November 2017
Choose It Narrative
Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.
Bradley choose it narrative
When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.
Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.
Long time ago once upon a time there there was a little boy called jack when he got older he really wanted to take people to my plane home,it had a forest and trees in front of the plane’s nose and it mixed up.
On the side of it had walking steers and it look like a house because of the green grass and it looks like one because the steers when you walk up there might be a door there or a secret button that you have to click. When the little boy saw at the back of him he saw 2 planes just like the first plane he saw.
The little boy saw a water car in front of the plane and he saw blue shining water. Next when I flew I did not know that there was a person climbing on the steps so he fell of and Threw a bomb into, my plane my plane exploded like fireworks. I had no parachute so my boss flew in his plane and got me and then I was safe. Next after that there was a doll climbing up on his heavy metal mysterious rope that can never cut down so my boss flew back to the palace and the evil disgusting doll’s name was annabelle but it did not move when I walked in, it was halloween And there was 5 skeletons and 25 pumpkins fat face that can move like real humans and they were trying to eat me and trap me into their pumpkin fathead jail.
The end.today morning we did a writing called choose a narrative it is fun and you have to pick a picture of your favourite one then you write about and do the planning and the main characters and the new characters.
Friday, 3 November 2017
Monday, 30 October 2017
Wednesday, 25 October 2017
Today morning room 11 & 12 went outside for a race. After we lined up on the side of our class. During when we were walking we sat down on the concrete in a boy’s line & girl’s line. Next we Mr Moran gave us instruction than the girls went first to stand on the line for there race it was the top 4. Finally it was the boys turn we had a raced I was sprinting through the wet green grass running to the finish line and getting past Mrs Moala. At last francis clapped the clapper and in the race John came first and Devante came second.
Friday, 20 October 2017
Wednesday, 18 October 2017
Start writing here: First I walked into the Immersion Assembly I saw two Men’s that had guitars and at the back there was one trumpet and one half of a drum set on the back stage. When everybody sat down Mrs Nua’ Mr Burt’ Mr Jacobson and Mr somerville played a song to us. Team 1’s movie was when some teachers were playing snap and they were playing music and then later on they got angry at each other then they heard a creepy noise. Team 2’s movie was when Mrs Gaston sang a song about in the jungle next some more Team 2 teachers added some music to make it better. Team 3’s movie was my favourite because it had my favourite songs in it. Team 4’s movie was when the Team 4 teachers was singing in the car and `being silly and when they came back to school Mr j came in his truck and Mrs Scanlan pulled down her sunglasses and then Mr Jacobson heard some music so he putted his music on. At last Team 5’s movie was when Mr s and Mr T said kids and they ate popcorn and Mr S said should we watch a movie so they did the kids said this is scare but Mr s said this is a kids movie so they watched and there was a monkey with a red nose and holded up the baby to it family.
Thursday, 28 September 2017
Wednesday, 20 September 2017
Friday, 15 September 2017
My what if planet!
Insert a picture of the planet you created on paper.
Write a paragraph describing your planet. Use adjectives to make your description more detailed. Don’t forget full stops and capital letters.
Start Writing here: My planet's name is bob I can see my own planet and my own spacecraft that has landed on my planet.
I can see my own colours my favourite 3 colours are white red and dark pink. On my tree’s it has silver stars glowing all around.
In the middle of nowhere I go inside the icy castle there is spider crawling around on their webs and my icy castle is made out of shiny sparkly diamonds and crystals.
On my planets their is red and orange fire floating all around and there is blue and red mixed together and it makes purple lightning and electric and the green is slimy.
Friday, 8 September 2017
My Amazing rocket Ship look like a Butterfly with a chicken head it special power you push the special button and it will give you McDonald it Thrusher come out with out with flames and money.
I used my Hover board to drive to the elevator. I get off my Hover then I pressed a button to get in. When I get out I jump on the trampoline 2x higher. Than I get in my rocket Ship on stairs then I sit on my chair than my rocket Ship say’s 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 then my Thrusters have fire at the bottom of it than my rocket goes slowly up into the air and does flips. When i'm out of space I see a dog floating outside my rocket and I see aliens and earth and mars.
As I was heading into space I go to mars I see rocks floating and see androids when I look up there is two moon Phobos and Deimos. It is like in space when I brush my teeth my toothbrush floats past when I let go. I see outside my rocket comets shooting past.
Wednesday, 6 September 2017
Friday, 25 August 2017
Monday, 21 August 2017
Start your writing here: The amount of the moon that you can see from earth depends how much of it is liter by the sun. This amount changes each day the phases of the moon depends on it position in the relation to the sun and earth. Is the moon makes it way around the earth we see the bright parts.
Friday, 18 August 2017
the green slimy frog gripped out of her tree and saw a little red and black cricket floating onto the slimy leaf down it water. Intime the cricket was close down the water intime the slimy frog caught the cricket with it outstretched tongue. But she did not noo that the crickets has be’nt in the rubbish bin. Next the frog did not noo where the other cricket so she looked around it was down it the river behind the tree. She caught it with her long tongue.
Monday, 14 August 2017
Season’s caused because of the earth’s travels around the sun and then orbit as the earth orbit the sun the amount of sunlight each place on the planet get’s everyday changes slightly this change cause is the seasons. We divide the year into four seasons spring’ summer’ autumn’ and winter. Each season last 3 months with summer in the warmest season winter in the coldest season’ and spring and autumn lying in between. The seasons impact happens.
Friday, 11 August 2017
every time when i come home i help my mum with the dishes and washing even folding the clothes and putting away the clothes and cleaning my room and my brothers room and my mum's room even my dog's bed and even the whole house. even when i got to Julia house there mum say's to them clean your room Julia and her little brother does not do so i do it. please read along
Wednesday, 9 August 2017
Paragraph Writing - Netball
We will talk about how we are going to craft this paragraph together.
On my plate is a delicious sandwich ready for me to eat. Filled with chicken and salad, the sandwich melts in my mouth. The sandwich is sitting in my lunchbox waiting for me to eat.
Start your writing here:
Netball is a sport that was played in the olden days, everyone enjoys playing this sport. Netball was called first women's basketball but than males came and played with the ladies then it became a sport in 1895. People enjoy playing netball because they like versing other teams. In the olden days people use to play netball in 70 countries.
Monday, 7 August 2017
Friday, 4 August 2017
Wednesday, 2 August 2017
A yo yo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with. A yo yo was made and played with 1,500 years ago they were Ancient toys in Greece. I enjoy playing with my yo yo, I like doing tricks and playing with my friends also it goes up and down
Monday, 31 July 2017
The sun is the largest star in our solar system however there are many stars just like is in the wider universe. The earth is just the right distance from the sun but our planet is not too hot or it is to cold. The light from the sun take 8 minutes to reach the earth and gives life to the plants. Astronauts will never able to land as reach 5000 degrees celsius. 100 times hotter than humans can stand. The sheer size of the sun means gravitational pull forces all planets in our solar system to orbit around it. Born 5 billion years ago the sun has been producing eat and light for a very long time.
Friday, 28 July 2017
When the kids were sitting all the lights turned off and there was stars above us. Than Mr S flew his drone in the air. Suddenly The rocket ship landed when they landed there was 2 mysterious creepy spooky Aliens Were looking for people to fight. Suddenly mr j and mr s came sprinting out with their lightsabers and killed the mysterious creepy spooky aliens.
Next Mr Burt said it’s time for team 1 mr j are put on a movie and they are learning about different kinds of planets and stars.
Team 2 were learning about as team 1. In their story their teacher were dancing and singing.
Than Mr Burt said it time for team 3 Mr Moran called Mrs king he said what is our film? Mrs King said Mr Moran look on your email so he did than mrs davis was having her lovely time outside in the autumn. Than Mr moran was singing frozen.
Monday, 3 July 2017
Write the story into this Doc, the one you just did in your book.
Start your writing here: Soaring through I feel like superman crashing through the waves like a dolphin. This experience is a feeling you only get ever so often hopping over the waves butterflies in my tummy. Spinning and twirling through the air I show the supporters all the tricks I able to do I can hear cheering and screaming from all my supporters.The hardest part about going kitesurfing is packing up having to pull the kite on and windy day is hard work. Kitesurfing is such and incredible sport.
Haunted House Pick a Path
Use descriptive words.
We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.
You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.
As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house. The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying. I search the house for the baby. I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”. I run for the front door. The door is locked shut there is no way out…
I found a key I tried to unlock the door but it was not the right key so I called someone but they did not answer so I called my social worker I told her get your key and come to the haunted house with lots of trees covering the haunted house. “She said why than I said this hurry up but she did not come. “I went to the back door there was a speaker it said you're not getting out of here I was thinking In my brain hm I think I will go up the chimney so I did but the chimney was blocked I saw stairs and I went up there but when I standed on any stairs the
stars started to crumble down. When I was at the top of the stairs I had no way to get down. I see a window I had a way out I saw a hammer and a axe I tried the hammer it smashed a big hole in the window but someone was upstairs I pecked my eyes to look if she was coming she was coming so I saw draws and saw a kitchen and I saw 5 cupboards I got my hammer and I smashed the cupboards down then I took one by one than I closed the door than I got the 5 cupboards and the draws and I blocked the door with the cupboards and draws but the ghosts came threw the door so I had no way out. But I got my hammer and I smack the hammer into it body but the ghosts went threw it. I ran up stairs then I saw something was up to me it was wooden buckets and draws so I smacked the them down than it bumped on the ghosts but the ghosts came back alive. I saw big web shooters on the side of the ghosts so I got 1 web shooter than I shot the web on the ghosts. To be continued
Frosty and BMX Kid
Start your writing here:
Jumping into the deep blue water the boy name was bmx and he done a humongous bomb. Delicious Sweet ice cream with sprinkles all over it and it dropped into the blue deep shallow water. Bmx bomb was big and massive and it look like a boat smashed into the rocky clift.
Under the blue sky bmx was having a talk to god about bombs and ice cream. God and the bmx kid were having a talk outside bmx and god going have a try to do a bomb.
Powerfully god done humongous bomb and it looked like a fountain of spray. God’s bomb was humongous and he done a humongous manu. God bomb was big and he made the mountains go raw.
Use descriptive words.
We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:
-What do you see (all of the picture)?
-Describe the Taniwha.
-What can you hear/smell?
Start your writing here:
I see people running away from the humongous fierce creature that has
A long pointy horn with spikes all over it. The creature has long sharp teeth. I saw people running on the dusty muddy ground and the ground is so slippery.I see a big beast hiding in the tall grass with mud all over it. When the people were running away the beast starting go on the dusty muddy ground.The next morning the people came back to see if the big humongous creature was there.
We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.
When you walk into this village in the year 1868, what do you see? What’s happening? What can you smell? What do you ask the people?
Start your writing here: When i walked in this beautiful maori village
In 1868 I see a old man and his color hair is grey. He gots jens on and the color of them are dark blue. I see him holding a little baby the bs color t - shirt is white. I see a lady wearing a blue dress and her hoodie is white. I smell and i smell baked food the baked food was mashed potato coming from the next door. When i went i saw a house that was brown and went to the house when i went there i saw a old man sitting down on a chair he was wearing red pants and a black t shirt i asked hem may i look around in your house? He said yes you may i went inside his room he had a blue and yellow bed i looked on the corner and there was a box i asked him may i go look inside it? He said you may i went to the box and i looked inside it there were pictures of him when he was a little boy. I said bye grandpa. As i walked outside i saw 2 boys there name was mike and jake.