Wednesday, 14 November 2018

Narrative Writing Plan

Today this is my Plan for my Narrative today so please check it out. Hope you Enjoy!

Tuesday, 13 November 2018


Today I was doing DMIC with my DMIC group for this week. So it was tiring but my group still worked it out so that is our question on our book. Hope you Enjoy.

Thursday, 8 November 2018


Today I was doing DMIC with my teacher and my DMIC group because mostly everybody was away. Hope You Enjoy!

Tuesday, 6 November 2018

That really stinks

That Really Stinks

WALT identify the characters, setting and problem in a narrative story.

WALT write an engaging solution to the problem in a narrative story.

Watch the story starter for the story, That Really Stinks.

Plan for your writing:

Characters: Sam and the 6 Tentacle Monsters.

Setting: Bathroom and the sewers.

Problem: The biggest tentacle monster took sam’s sisters phone.

Write the ending for the story.

The tentacle monster clicks the fart button than he drops the phone. Than he goes and gets the phone. Next he runs away.

Fast finisher?

Write the beginning of the story to go with the movie.

That really stinks. Sam was in the Bathroom on his sister’s phone. He kept on clicking this button, the button was if he pushes. IT fart noises come out he took sams sister’s phone down the toilet than Sam flushed he self down the toilet and followed the monster down to the monster’s lair. To be continued.

Wednesday, 31 October 2018


Today for DMIC today it was hard and it took long for me to finish but here's the link.

Wednesday, 24 October 2018


Today I was learning about Miss West went to Muriwai Beach. On Saturday she went for a walk she has walked 9732 steps. On Sunday She walked 1289 steps. What our answer is telling us is how many steps did Miss West walk to Sunday.

Recount W2 T4

Writing: One day, in the evening I went to point chevalier beach for my cousin Calvin’s birthday. When my mum my dad and my brother’s and I finally got to point chevalier beach I saw my cousin sitting on the beach chair eating his banana and drinking his water. I saw this platform in the water that you could stand on and jump of so I asked my mum can I go on the platform she said where so I showed her where she said make sure don’t get hurt so I went in the cold cold water and I climbed up the ladder. When I saw other people jumping of. I wanted to Jump of as well but I couldn’t jump of because I was to little and plus when I walked across to the platform the tide was low but when I went and climbed up the ladder. One eternity later. I was relaxing on the platform when the platform was bumpy side to side because people will still jumping of. I finished my relax on the platform but when I woke up the tide was so high that I couldn’t get back to the sand. So my dad came across to the water and got me back across. Phew, so when I changed into nice and clean clothes so when I came back to the table I came in time for saying Happy 1st birthday to my cousin calvin. So I ate the chocolate cake with vanilla icing,sprinkles,chocolate cream, and chocolate chips on it. There was a the number one on it. Have a happy day ever after and here is the link to see what we are writing about.  LINK