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Monday 17 October 2016

Who took the bread

Who took the bread??  Make your story interesting and descriptive.
One morning we woke up then we were feeding our dog we put the bread on the table. Then we went in the lounge to watch tv. we went in the kitchen then there was no bread because the thief took it. 
The thief ran away out the door. Then the people came back then there  saw footprints on the floor then they followed the footprints the footprints was on the kitchen floor too. They looked on the table in the kitchen then there were no bread. We went to the police station to explain them if they can go and find our bread then they went to find them they got them and putted them in jail then we got our bread back.


One morning we woke up and we were feeding our grumpy dog.  We put the bread on the table. Then we went in the lounge to watch tv. We went in the kitchen then there was no bread because the thief took it. 
The thief ran away out the door. Then the people came back and saw footprints on the floor.  They followed the  muddy footprints on the kitchen floor. They looked on the table in the kitchen then there was no bread. We went to the police station to ask them if they can go and find our bread.  They went to find them. They find the people who stole  the bread then they brought the bread back to the delighted. people and then they were happily ever after.

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