Once upon a time there was a old house called a wooden shack outside on the grass. It is muddy and inside it is yucky and dusty and it has cockroaches and yucky webs. They are yucky and smelley and the webs are sticky. In the shack my rhino has got two horns and it can knock some animals over. Along came some more cockroaches and the rhino ate them for dinner.
You used many juicy words that painted a picture in my mind of your shack. I can imagine the sticky web!
ReplyDeleteCaitlin.