We are the Champions! Immersion Assembly Olympics
Today we were excellent and fabulous and we were a champion. We really liked rhythmic gymnastics and Miss Berry was Australia and lots of people were clapping.
The three champions got a gorgeous medal. Miss Clark was USA and everybody was clapping for her. Mr Wiseman was New Zealand and he was using a girl ballet costume.
Great work Bradley. I'm really pleased to see you have used some exciting words in your story. This helps it to be more interesting for the reader. Great to see capital letters in the right places. You have worked hard to include so many sentences and I look forward to you keeping up this effort.
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