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Wednesday 6 June 2018

Water bucket narrative

Beginning Once upon a time there was a little cute rabbit a big bull and a big fat horse there names was Milo the rabbit Bert the bull and Mike the horse they were exploring around everywhere but they talked to each other and said should we go explore at a country everybody is “Oh yes sure everybody clear to go to a country” they said “Next everybody said yes” ok Next Mike said now we just need to find a country to go to. “Yeah we do” ok lets go to China nah oh i know what about going to
thailand “that's a great idea” now we just need to go travel there so they all packed there stuff and travelled in the plane called pets-Only so they travelled and they finally got to thailand “huh look what i found said mike” what is it what is it “it is a waterfall wanna go to it ok everybody said now everybody got there togs on yes ok lets go swim we just need to go across the rope ok here we go Milo and Bert got across but mike didn’t hurry mike come “i can’t” why the rope is to little it ok believin yourself you can do it so he tried it got to the middle but he was scared because there was a little bit left to do to he ran back “Noooooooo don’t run back back the water is to heavy if you fall down you will go to far down the waterfall and go somewhere else please don’t do it” well i fell “nooooooooooo” so Mike went down the waterfall and he went to into a hotel soaking wet “now no one knows where is he” Mike went out of the hotel with a towel and he went outside he saw Milo and Bert trying to find him but he didn’t want to go to them because he wanted togs but he didn’t have any so he went back in the water tried to get back up but he nearly got to the top but he fell down and went so fast down to a water mountain and drowned there “Hey bert look at the water mountain i think that him up there so they went and saw mike drowning everywhere that’s him. Lets save him “we can’t” said bert why because he drowning ok you stay here i’m going to get go travel back to home and get my bag of tools so she went Bert got Mike but he was to heavy so he tried to pull him up but Milo got back so fast in the pets-only flying train and went back to the water mountain and Bert said End “help he to heavy if i can’t lift him up i’m gonna drown as well help ok milo went in his bag and he had a crafting metal machine so he put is metal hook and rope in the machine it made a hard metal long rope and he got it out and threw it to mike and mike got it so bert and milo pulled him up but it wouldn’t work so he 3 2 1 so they pulled him up and mike finally got up so Milo said i’ll go buy you some togs so he did mike put it on went to go swim and the pools when they were finish swimming mike said sorry that i put you into all this trouble i will never do it again

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