The sun diction

The sun is the largest star in our solar system however there are many stars just like is in the wider universe. The earth is just the right distance from the sun but our planet is not too hot or it is to cold. The light from the sun take 8 minutes to reach the earth and gives life to the plants. Astronauts will never able to land as reach 5000 degrees celsius. 100 times hotter than humans can stand. The sheer size of the sun means gravitational pull forces all planets in our solar system to orbit around it. Born 5 billion years ago the sun has been producing eat and light for a very long time.

Immersion Asembly

When the kids were sitting all the lights turned off and there was stars above us. Than Mr S flew his drone in the air. Suddenly The rocket ship landed when they landed there was 2 mysterious creepy spooky Aliens Were looking for people to fight. Suddenly mr j and mr s came sprinting out with their lightsabers and killed the mysterious creepy spooky aliens.

Next Mr Burt said it’s time for team 1 mr j are put on a movie and they are learning about different kinds of planets and stars.

Team 2 were learning about as team 1. In their story their teacher were dancing and singing.

Than Mr Burt said it time for team 3 Mr Moran called Mrs king he said what is our film? Mrs King said Mr Moran look on your email so he did than mrs davis was having her lovely time outside in the autumn. Than Mr moran was singing frozen.

what wrong with pluto

waves dictaion

waves dictaion

Write the story into this Doc, the one you just did in your book.

Start your writing here: Soaring through I feel like superman crashing through the waves like a dolphin. This experience is a feeling you only get ever so often hopping over the waves butterflies in my tummy. Spinning and twirling through the air I show the supporters all the tricks I able to do I can hear cheering and screaming from all my supporters.The hardest part about going kitesurfing is packing up having to pull the kite on and windy day is hard work. Kitesurfing is such and incredible sport.

pick a path

        Haunted House Pick a Path

Use descriptive words.

We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.  

You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out…

I found a key I tried to unlock the door but it was not the right key so I called someone but they did not answer so I called my social worker I told her get your key and come to the haunted house with lots of trees covering the haunted house. “She said why than I said this hurry up but she did not come. “I went to the back door there was a speaker it said you're not getting out of here I was thinking In my brain hm I think I will go up the chimney so I did but the chimney was blocked I saw stairs and I went up there but when I standed on any stairs the

stars started to crumble down. When I was at the top of the stairs I had no way to get down. I see a window I had a way out I saw a hammer and a axe I tried the hammer it smashed a big hole in the window but someone was upstairs I pecked my eyes to look if she was coming she was coming so I saw draws and saw a kitchen and I saw 5 cupboards I got my hammer and I smashed the cupboards down then I took one by one than I closed the door than I got the 5 cupboards and the draws and I blocked the door with the cupboards and draws but the ghosts came threw the door so I had no way out. But I got my hammer and I smack the hammer into it body but the ghosts went threw it. I ran up stairs then I saw something was up to me it was wooden buckets and draws  so I smacked the them down than it bumped on the ghosts but the ghosts came back alive. I saw big web shooters on the side of the  ghosts so I got 1 web shooter than I shot the web on the ghosts. To be continued

frosty and bmx kid

Frosty and BMX Kid

Start your writing here:

Jumping into the deep blue water the boy name was bmx and he done a humongous bomb. Delicious Sweet ice cream with sprinkles all over it and it dropped into the blue deep shallow water. Bmx bomb was big and massive and it look like a boat smashed into the rocky clift.

Under the blue sky bmx was having a talk to god about bombs and ice cream. God and the bmx kid were having a talk outside bmx and god going have a try to do a bomb.

Powerfully god done humongous bomb and it looked like a fountain of spray. God’s bomb was humongous and he done a humongous manu. God bomb was big and he made the mountains go raw.

the taniwha

The Taniwha

Use descriptive words.

We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:

-What do you see (all of the picture)?

-Describe the Taniwha.

-What can you hear/smell?

Start your writing here:

I see people running away from the humongous fierce creature that has                    

A long pointy horn with spikes all over it. The creature has long sharp teeth. I saw people running on the dusty  muddy ground and the ground is so slippery.I see a big beast hiding in the tall grass with mud all over it. When the people were running away the beast starting go on the dusty muddy ground.The next morning the people came back to see if the big humongous creature was there.

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Maori Village

Maori Village

We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.

When you walk into this village in the year 1868, what do you see? What’s happening? What can you smell?  What do you ask the people?

Start your writing here: When i walked in this beautiful maori village

In 1868 I see a old man and his color hair is grey. He gots jens on and the color of them are dark blue.  I see him holding a little baby the bs color t - shirt is white. I see a lady wearing a blue dress and her hoodie is white. I smell and i smell baked food the baked food was mashed potato coming from the next door. When i went i saw a house that was brown and went to the house when i went there i saw a old man sitting down on a chair he was wearing red pants and a black t shirt i asked hem may i look around in your house? He said yes you may i went inside his room he had a blue and yellow bed i looked on the corner and there was a box i asked him may i go look inside it? He said you may i went to the box and i looked inside it there were pictures of him when he was a little boy. I said bye grandpa. As i walked outside i saw 2 boys there name was mike and jake.